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IELTS Writing task 1: Bar chart lesson

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  • bluMoon
    bluMoon 2 жыл бұрын +827

    0:30 Describing a bar chart
    1:46 Band 9 answer structure
    - Introduction (Introduce your chart in 1-2 sentences)
    - Overview (Describe general trends)
    - Feature 1
    - Feature 2
    2:50 Introduction (1-2 sentences)
    - Paraphrase given information
    - Write 2 things:
    1. What your graph shows
    2. For what period of time
    - Synonyms:
    + Shows = provide information about = represents = illustrates
    + Divorce rate = percentages of divorces
    + From 2011 to 2015 = Between 2011 and 2015
    5:27 Overview
    - Describes trends ( should have 2-4 key features )
    - NEVER write numbers, percentages or dates in overview
    - Compare beginning and the end
    - Always start overview with ‘overall’
    - Describing: + Experienced a downward trend. + Showed an upward trend
    + Initially had a lower rate
    - Linking words: While
    9:15 Specific details
    - Group specific features into separate paragraphs
    - Write 2-3 separate paragraphs
    9:50 Paragraph 1 (Details about Sweden)
    - Write numbers ,percentages and include useful details as much as you can
    - Describing: + Was about 45%(use ‘about’ when you’re not sure the exact percentage)
    + Being higher than ..... by approximately 8%
    + Rose to almost 50%. + Showed a gradual decrease
    + Hitting a low point
    - Linking word: However (To show that Sweden’s rate changed)
    - All percentages are not exact ( used ‘around’ and ‘about’ )
    14:49 Paragraph 2 (Details about Finland)
    - Describing: + Was less than 40%. + Decreased in 2012, when about one third
    + Experienced a steady growth. + Rose to approximately 39%. + Increased by around 3%
    + Remained steady for the next year, outracing...
    Linking word: However
    16:57 Full Paragraph

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    • Ielts Prep
      Ielts Prep 5 ай бұрын

      In pie chart, overview is shorter. Here, it is longer. What should we choose?

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    • yunus emre
      yunus emre 3 жыл бұрын

      8:27 why did he said "had some fluctations" cant we just use the past simple and say "fluctuated"??

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      Deep Rahul 3 жыл бұрын +1

      forrest gump u can use past tense but u have to make sure u use the same tense throughout the sentence or throughout the paragraph

    • yunus emre
      yunus emre 3 жыл бұрын +1

      8:27 why did he said "had some fluctations" cant we just use the past simple and say "fluctuated"??

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